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8go a77e4161c4
Eclair: English touch ups, commas
- commas
- reorg of sentences
- "Check to..." sentence is copy-paste from above, changed it slightly to avoid repetition
- OK, Eclair is uppercase, but here we refer to a directory which is lowercase, so "eclair" (just because it is the lowercase name of the dir)
- etc
4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos 8a460b2547 Merge branch 'node_operations_chapter' into develop 4 years ago
Rene Pickhardt 078ae93a50 wrote a little bit about stuckless payments but not happy with it 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos f3d5f8ef94 node_operations: choosing node type 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos 3f7838e84c Merge branch 'node_operations_chapter' into develop 4 years ago
8go 90836468d0
Eclair: English touch ups
- commas
- "by this point" --> "at this point" or "by this time". Maybe best "by now"
- "... you have seen previously to build the Eclair container" is ambiguous. Rephrased
- "directly" .... word order
- it's: incorrect,  --> its
- "unlike the LND or c-lightning containers": did not read well, reordered sub-phrases
- eclair vs Eclair: ok, the logo is lower cased. But when you read their https://github.com/ACINQ/eclair page ALL occurrences of Eclair are UPPERCASED.
- Based on their own use of "Eclair" in English text I have upper-cased all "Eclair" occurrences 
- up to line 779 it was already upper-case, then suddenly it was lower-case
- rephrasing
- etc
4 years ago
Rene Pickhardt 7ec3ca3686 added more to the path finding chapter 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos dde1228235 node_operations: choosing bitcoin node and OS 4 years ago
8go ac2ec76dd4
LND: more English fixes, 1 error
- again commas
- sentence simplifications
- typo
- "at minimum" : that's wrong, "at a minimum", "at least" but I rephrased anyway to avoid it altogether because it does not read well in any case due to the following "or later"
- "distributed" repetitive, changed to "available"
- "It doesn't matter where the GOPATH points" ... this is misleading or could be misunderstood. I rephrased.
- ERROR: "git clone" should be "go get"
4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos 3c680bec24 node_operations - added BTCPay 4 years ago
8go 06b8a2f38e
more touch ups, English, commas (#340)
- replaced ", as is often the case," with "common"
- "prerequisite" has no hyphen
- in most cases no comma in front of "which"
- replaced "that we can do" with "available"
- if there is a list of 3 choices, one can place (optional) a comma before the "and". This is called the Oxford comma. It is optional, but it should be used consistently, always in the book or never. Since above it was used, I set it below as well.
- replaced "aggressively" with "heavily", we are not aggressive :)
- etc.
4 years ago
8go fd9635d345
minor touch up, English corrections (#338)
- usually there is no comma in front of because, as, etc. (exceptions exist)
- other commas
- "Let's" sounds very colloquial. It shows up a lot. In a couple of locations I replaced it with "let us" to make it a bit more formal, but I did not want to replace all. Maybe colloquialisms create some closeness to the reader.
- "also" seemed out of place
- local area network  has no hyphen
- "not important, but has ...": either no comma   or   a subject (it) has to be added after "but"
- "like this" was also a bit repetitive, I replaced it once with "as follows"
4 years ago
Zachery Glass 1454b0e50e
Fix minor spelling, capitalization and grammar mistakes in channel-construction.asciidoc (#339) 4 years ago
Francisco Calderon 99ded49570
Enumerate using asciidoc for better readability (#336) 4 years ago
Rene Pickhardt 53b06e8f0e added information sources for path finding 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos d8eeb4ba03
Merge pull request #147 from HAOYUatHZ/explorer
add LN explorer section
4 years ago
8go cee0dfe142
LND: typos, touch ups, English, etc.
- no comma in front of "and" in a list of 2
- same for "or" in list of 2
- list of 3: yes, we want a comma there to be consistent (Oxford comma, see PR #340 
- many many --> many
4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos 9008219681 Merge branch 'node_operations_chapter' into develop 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos 56e5ee430a Merge remote-tracking branch 'aantonop_fork/node_operations_chapter' into node_operations_chapter 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos dc85ccc532 Node operations: merged and rewrote hardware requirements 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos 00d55ed729 Small changes to outline 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos aad9e62f8f README status updates and word count 4 years ago
Rene Pickhardt 905031554b editing path finding, adding path construction, discussing fundamental observatins about path finding 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos 138b4174a3 Merge remote-tracking branch 'github/develop' into develop 4 years ago
Imran 537a502072
Path-finding - Fixed typo (#335) 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos dc63aeefac README status updates and word count 4 years ago
Rene Pickhardt f29f9e3336 Merge branch 'develop' of https://github.com/lnbook/lnbook into develop 4 years ago
Rene Pickhardt eabb0e9455 finnished todays work 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos 17b3c62786
Merge pull request #290 from aantonop/03_ama_edits_wip
WIP: chapter 03 AMA edits
4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos 846a14d62e Fixes to edit review 4 years ago
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Rene Pickhardt 3758be4dc0 Merge branch 'develop' of https://github.com/lnbook/lnbook into develop 4 years ago
Rene Pickhardt 6f78cf6ea7 added a few remarks to the path finding chapter 4 years ago
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Andreas M. Antonopoulos 65b1917632 copy from ch03 4 years ago
Rene Pickhardt 94d7a82a3c
Update onion-routing-htlc-forwarding.asciidoc
link to file name
4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos 547a14531b Copy from ch03 4 years ago
Rene Pickhardt 7ace5d9d0e Merge branch 'ImranLorgat-CH-Onion-Routing-Imran---Packet-Size' into develop 4 years ago
Rene Pickhardt 825c02deda decided to keep the onion routing file 4 years ago