The existing examples and diagrams towards the end of the chapter are
actually out of date now, as the network as mostly moved over to using
the TLV format everywhere within the onion payload.
- Oxford comma for consistency (see PR #340)
- sentence restructuring (one does not compose by routing a payment)
- no comma in list of 2
- only the top of the config is listed, we should say so. --> The top looks like ...
- in most cases, no comma before "because" or "since", exceptions apply
- it's (wrong) --> its (possessive)
- commas
- reorg of sentences
- "Check to..." sentence is copy-paste from above, changed it slightly to avoid repetition
- OK, Eclair is uppercase, but here we refer to a directory which is lowercase, so "eclair" (just because it is the lowercase name of the dir)
- etc
- commas
- "by this point" --> "at this point" or "by this time". Maybe best "by now"
- "... you have seen previously to build the Eclair container" is ambiguous. Rephrased
- "directly" .... word order
- it's: incorrect, --> its
- "unlike the LND or c-lightning containers": did not read well, reordered sub-phrases
- eclair vs Eclair: ok, the logo is lower cased. But when you read their https://github.com/ACINQ/eclair page ALL occurrences of Eclair are UPPERCASED.
- Based on their own use of "Eclair" in English text I have upper-cased all "Eclair" occurrences
- up to line 779 it was already upper-case, then suddenly it was lower-case
- rephrasing
- etc
- again commas
- sentence simplifications
- typo
- "at minimum" : that's wrong, "at a minimum", "at least" but I rephrased anyway to avoid it altogether because it does not read well in any case due to the following "or later"
- "distributed" repetitive, changed to "available"
- "It doesn't matter where the GOPATH points" ... this is misleading or could be misunderstood. I rephrased.
- ERROR: "git clone" should be "go get"
- replaced ", as is often the case," with "common"
- "prerequisite" has no hyphen
- in most cases no comma in front of "which"
- replaced "that we can do" with "available"
- if there is a list of 3 choices, one can place (optional) a comma before the "and". This is called the Oxford comma. It is optional, but it should be used consistently, always in the book or never. Since above it was used, I set it below as well.
- replaced "aggressively" with "heavily", we are not aggressive :)
- etc.
- usually there is no comma in front of because, as, etc. (exceptions exist)
- other commas
- "Let's" sounds very colloquial. It shows up a lot. In a couple of locations I replaced it with "let us" to make it a bit more formal, but I did not want to replace all. Maybe colloquialisms create some closeness to the reader.
- "also" seemed out of place
- local area network has no hyphen
- "not important, but has ...": either no comma or a subject (it) has to be added after "but"
- "like this" was also a bit repetitive, I replaced it once with "as follows"
- no comma in front of "and" in a list of 2
- same for "or" in list of 2
- list of 3: yes, we want a comma there to be consistent (Oxford comma, see PR #340
- many many --> many
