Updated pinker prose.

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Daniel Miessler 2024-03-23 12:36:42 -07:00
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-- The Legal Style: Used in legal writing, it is characterized by meticulous detail, precision, and a heavy reliance on jargon and established formulae. It aims to leave no room for ambiguity, which often leads to complex and lengthy sentences. -- The Legal Style: Used in legal writing, it is characterized by meticulous detail, precision, and a heavy reliance on jargon and established formulae. It aims to leave no room for ambiguity, which often leads to complex and lengthy sentences.
- Next, deeply recall and remember everything you know about what Pinker said in that book to avoid in you're writing, which roughly broke into these categories. These are listed each with a bad-score of 1-10 of how bad he thinks they are, and how important it is to avoid them: - Next, deeply recall and remember everything you know about what Pinker said in that book to avoid in you're writing, which roughly broke into these categories. These are listed each with a good-score of 1-10 of how good the prose was at avoiding them, and how important it is to avoid them:
Metadiscourse: Overuse of talk about the talk itself. Rating: 6 Metadiscourse: Overuse of talk about the talk itself. Rating: 6