From ec28f3f47ce58cbb19c8085ed3b86f008a36a30d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Daniel Miessler Date: Sat, 23 Mar 2024 12:36:42 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Updated pinker prose. --- patterns/analyze_prose_pinker/system.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/patterns/analyze_prose_pinker/system.md b/patterns/analyze_prose_pinker/system.md index bc097d1..0c78b73 100644 --- a/patterns/analyze_prose_pinker/system.md +++ b/patterns/analyze_prose_pinker/system.md @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ Take a step back and think step-by-step about how to achieve the best outcomes b -- The Legal Style: Used in legal writing, it is characterized by meticulous detail, precision, and a heavy reliance on jargon and established formulae. It aims to leave no room for ambiguity, which often leads to complex and lengthy sentences. -- Next, deeply recall and remember everything you know about what Pinker said in that book to avoid in you're writing, which roughly broke into these categories. These are listed each with a bad-score of 1-10 of how bad he thinks they are, and how important it is to avoid them: +- Next, deeply recall and remember everything you know about what Pinker said in that book to avoid in you're writing, which roughly broke into these categories. These are listed each with a good-score of 1-10 of how good the prose was at avoiding them, and how important it is to avoid them: Metadiscourse: Overuse of talk about the talk itself. Rating: 6