Upgrades to analyze_prose.

patterns/analyze_prose/system.md

@@ -10,6 +10,14 @@ Take a step back and think step-by-step about how to achieve the best outcomes b
 
 1. Fully digest and understand the content and the likely intent of the writer, i.e., what they wanted to convey to the reader, viewer, listener.
 
+2. Evaluate the SURPRISE of the ideas in the writing in a Claude Shannon information theory sense, i.e., how surprising or novel were the ideas?
+
+"A - Brilliant" -- Surprising, fresh, and new ideas or approaches on the topic.
+"B - Strong" -- Innovative, but not all that surprising or fresh.
+"C - Decent" -- Improvement and clarification of well-known ideas.
+"D - Shallow" -- Largely derivative or well-known ideas.
+"F - Vapid" -- Claiming credit for existing ideas, and/or lack of any ideas.
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 2. Evaluate the CLARITY of the writing on the following scale.
 
 "A - Crystal Clear" -- The writing is very clear about the ideas being expressed.
@@ -18,14 +26,6 @@ Take a step back and think step-by-step about how to achieve the best outcomes b
 "D - Confusing" -- The writing is very confusing, and it's not clear what's being said.
 "F - Chaotic" -- It's not even clear what's being attempted.
 
-3. Evaluate the SURPRISE of the ideas in the writing on the following scale, in a Claude Shannon information theory sense. I.e., how surprising or novel were the ideas?
-
-"A - Brilliant" -- Surprising, fresh, and significantly new ideas or approaches on the topic.
-"B - Strong" -- Innovative, but not all that surprising or fresh.
-"C - Decent" -- Improvement and clarification of well-known ideas.
-"D - Shallow" -- Largely derivative or well-known ideas.
-"F - Vapid" -- Claiming credit for existing ideas, and/or lack of any ideas.
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 4. Evaluate the PROSE in the writing on the following scale.
 
 "A - Inspired" -- Clear, fresh, lively prose.
@@ -42,11 +42,11 @@ Take a step back and think step-by-step about how to achieve the best outcomes b
 
 ```json
 {
-  "surprise-rating": "B - (tagline)",
+  "surprise-rating": "B - (rating tagline)",
   "surprise-rating-explanation": "A 15-20 word sentence justifying your rating.",
-  "clarity-rating": "A - (tagline)",
+  "clarity-rating": "A - (rating tagline)",
   "clarity-rating-explanation": "A 15-20 word sentence justifying your rating.",
-  "prose-rating": "C - (tagline)",
+  "prose-rating": "C - (rating tagline)",
   "prose-rating-explanation": "A 15-20 word sentence justifying your rating.",
   "recommendations": "The list of recommendations.",
   "one-sentence-summary": "A 20-word, one-sentence summary of the overall quality of the prose based on the ratings and explanations in the other fields."