--- name: Editorial about: 'Editorial changes: Keep/Drop, Simplify, Expand, Re-write, Re-organize, Move' title: 'Editorial: [Keep/Drop, Simplify, Expand, Re-write, Re-organize, Move] ' labels: editorial assignees: '' --- **Which part needs editing?** Which part of the book needs editing? Filename, line? **What editing does this need?** Some options: Keep/Drop, Simplify, Expand, Re-write, Re-organize, Move **How does it currently read?** Copy the text that needs editing, if it is small enough **How should it read?** Write a recommended solution here, if you can!