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8go 26b0fb4e78
minor corrections in Payment channels paragraphs (#181)
- "the both of you": incorrect English, better "both of you"
- "cheat on you": spoken English, better "cheat you"
- "had to be", that sounds like you are guessing, better "was"
- if you give full names of some, give full names of all 
- added year to make it more precise
- etc.
4 years ago
8go bf44a80973
minor improvements, corrections (#180)
- comma must follow "additionally" and "however" as they are introductory words or phrases
- same for "last but not least", comma missing
- "nothing else than", not perfect English; better "nothing but" 
- "get most use", not perfect English; better "get more benefits"
4 years ago
8go a80f758b1f
minor improvements in Note (#179)
- 2-out-of-2 is more consistent (see usage above) and carries more information than 2-2
- comma after however needed
4 years ago
8go b4204ba4cf
added a few words to improve definition paragraph (#178)
- consistent use of "partner"
- added "Bitcoin" to "Bitcoin smart contract" because there are many people out there that have heard the term "smart contract" exclusively in the context of Ethereum. It might be worth while to underline that Bitcoin also has its form of smart contracts. This should eliminate any possible doubts.
- imply that earlier states are no longer valid, added "invalidated" 
- channel member is singular, so "if they try" is wrong. better "if it tries"
4 years ago
8go 52aa362dcc
improved definition of LN (#177)
- removed incorrect comma in front of "as well as"
- added "both" to make it stronger that LN has 2 main functionalities
- "... on the network." leaves it undefined. The reader might ask to which netowrk it refers to? To the before mentioned netowrk of payment-channels? Added "Bitcoin" to clarify.
4 years ago
8go 6ec8035b52
clarifications and additions (#173)
* clarifiactions and additions

some modifications to improve, clarify

some additions to add more details where appropriate

... lightweight Bitcoin client (commonly referred to as Simplified Payment Verification (SPV)) to partially validate the correctness of their blockchain. --> partially? Probably you mean "indirectly" as you delegate to a third party. Also SPVs clients don't have a blockchain, so why "their blockchain"? --> to reduce this confusion --> lightweight Bitcoin client (commonly referred to as Simplified Payment Verification (SPV)) to interact with the blockchain

... lightning wallets ... --> ... Lightning wallets ...

centralized and added more details to definition of non-custodial wallet

* Update 02_getting_started.asciidoc

added the sentince back in

Co-authored-by: Rene Pickhardt <rene@rene-pickhardt.de>
4 years ago
8go 94bdc595c5
minor improvements and clarifications (#170)
- minor clarifications
- incorrect use of plural
- repetitive use of "this way" --> this fashion
- clarifying "each time" --> each payment
- added detail that LN txs are not stored permanently
- repetitive use of "explanation" --> clarification
- seeing --> revisiting
- etc.
4 years ago
Kory Newton 3ef507291a
fix glossary typos (#167) 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos ba57fe3f84 bitcoind regtest docker image 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos d7ff4c65f6 Use openjdk:11 docker image for eclair 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos 3b854531c1 Use golang docker image for lnd_base 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos 7b491a92ad Separate dockerfiles and docker-compose 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos 58a895c1a2 Added eclair 0.3.3 4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos a86d64e439 Development Environment: Dockerfile draft
Installs dev tools, bitcoind, c-lightning, lnd
4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos ed13d20960
Merge pull request #163 from brianmcmichael/brianmcmichael_ch01
Ch. 1 readthrough.
4 years ago
Andreas M. Antonopoulos 19e6a0357c
Merge pull request #156 from PatrickLemke/fix-typos-ch03
Fix typos ch03
4 years ago
Brian McMichael 01cef463ef Fix sp. breaking build 4 years ago
Brian McMichael b2b9e55f2a ox comma 4 years ago
Brian McMichael 09d04a297c comma 4 years ago
Brian McMichael b2760a81e3 bitcoin and demand grow 4 years ago
Brian McMichael 88e78da7e5 non obvious => non-obvious 4 years ago
Patrick Lemke 68911c5560 remove end of line spaces 4 years ago
Patrick Lemke 504d7f37e8 add patricklemke to contributions in preface 4 years ago
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Patrick Lemke 18fbeb85d2 comma separation 4 years ago
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