tiny English improvements 3

- putting emphasis on repository being online
- "the" article required in this case
- removed "version" from "ebook version" to simplify
- green: work order corrected
- no comma with "..., to"
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@ -32,11 +32,11 @@ To keep things consistent, we use the +bash+ shell in all command-line examples.
==== Donwloading the book repository
All the code examples are available in the book's repository. The repository will be kept up-to-date, as much as possible, so you should always look for the latest version in the repository, instead of copying it from the printed book or ebook version of this test.
All the code examples are available in the book's online repository. Because the repository will be kept up-to-date as much as possible, you should always look for the latest version in the online repository, instead of copying it from the printed book or the ebook.
You can download the repository as a ZIP bundle by visiting +github.com/lnbook/lnbook+ and selecting the "Clone or Download" green button on the right.
You can download the repository as a ZIP bundle by visiting +github.com/lnbook/lnbook+ and selecting the green "Clone or Download" button on the right.
Alternatively, you can use the +git+ command, to create a version-controlled clone of the repository on your local computer. Git is a distributed version control system that is used by most developers to collaborate on software development and track changes to software repositories. Donwload and install +git+ by following the instructions on https://git-scm.com/.
Alternatively, you can use the +git+ command to create a version-controlled clone of the repository on your local computer. Git is a distributed version control system that is used by most developers to collaborate on software development and track changes to software repositories. Donwload and install +git+ by following the instructions on https://git-scm.com/.
To make a local copy of the repository on your computer, run the git command as follows:

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