Further simplify commands

Installation-on-ReMarkable.md

@@ -1,53 +1,55 @@
 ## SSH into your device
 
-0. Windows users will need to install an [OpenSSH Client](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows-server/administration/openssh/openssh_install_firstuse#install-openssh-using-windows-settings). MacOS and Linux users need no extra software.
+0. Windows users may need to install an [OpenSSH Client](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows-server/administration/openssh/openssh_install_firstuse#install-openssh-using-windows-settings)
 1. Connect your device via USB
 2. Find your device password `Menu > Settings > Help > Copyright and Licenses`
-3. Open terminal and run:
-```
-ssh root@10.11.99.1
-```
+3. Open terminal and run: `ssh root@10.11.99.1`
 
 ## Installing
 
 ### Installation via Toltec
+
 1. SSH into your device and install [Toltec](https://github.com/toltec-dev/toltec#install-it)
 2.
     - For reMarkable 1: `opkg install koreader`
     - For reMarkable 2: `opkg install rm2fb koreader`
 
-3. Edit the default service file and copy it to the system directory by running:
+3. Create a Toltec-compatible service file by running:
 ```
-sed "s|/home/root/koreader/koreader.sh|/opt/bin/koreader|g" /opt/koreader/koreader.service > /etc/systemd/system/koreader.service
+sed 's|/.*sh|/opt/bin/koreader|' /opt/koreader/koreader.service > /etc/systemd/system/koreader.service
 ```
 4. Launch KOReader:
 ```
 systemctl start koreader
 ```
 - Check for updates from within KOReader as Toltec may not have yet indexed the latest release
-- To return to Xochitl simply exit KOReader
-- reMarkable firmware updates will delete KOReader's systemd units. Run `toltecctl reenable` and step 3 after every firmware update
+- After every reMarkable firmware update, run `toltecctl reenable` and re-run step 3 
 
 ### Manual installation
+
 1. Download the [latest release](https://github.com/koreader/koreader/releases) of KOReader
 2. Open terminal and navigate to your downloads folder:
 ```
-cd Downloads
+cd ~/Downloads
 ```
 3. Copy the zip file to your device by running:
 ```
-scp koreader-remarkable-*.zip root@10.11.99.1:
+scp ~/koreader-remarkable-*.zip root@10.11.99.1:
 ```
-4. SSH into your device and unzip the file:
+4. SSH into your device:
 ```
-unzip koreader-remarkable-*.zip
+ssh root@10.11.99.1
 ```
-5. Copy the service file to the system directory:
+5. Unzip the file:
 ```
-cp -v koreader/koreader.service /etc/systemd/system/
+unzip ~/koreader-remarkable-*.zip
 ```
-6. reMarkable 2 users must install [rm2fb](https://github.com/ddvk/remarkable2-framebuffer#installation)
-7. Launch KOReader:
+6. Copy the service file to the system directory:
+```
+cp -v ~/koreader/*.service /etc/systemd/system/
+```
+7. Install [rm2fb](https://github.com/ddvk/remarkable2-framebuffer#installation) (reMarkable 2 only)
+8. Launch KOReader:
 ```
 systemctl start koreader
 ```
@@ -56,37 +58,33 @@ systemctl start koreader
 
 ### Automatic launch
 
-**Warning:** Make sure `systemctl start koreader` works before proceeding!
-
 To launch KOReader at startup, SSH into your device and run:
 ```
-systemctl enable koreader
-systemctl disable xochitl
+systemctl enable --now koreader && systemctl disable xochitl
 reboot
 ```
 
 ### External launcher
 
-KOReader can be launched by: [oxide](https://github.com/Eeems/oxide), [draft](https://github.com/dixonary/draft-reMarkable) and [remux](https://rmkit.dev/apps/remux). They can installed via [toltec](https://github.com/toltec-dev/toltec#install-it), for example:
+Launcher applications such as [oxide](https://github.com/Eeems/oxide), [draft](https://github.com/dixonary/draft-reMarkable) and [remux](https://rmkit.dev/apps/remux) can be installed via [Toltec](https://github.com/toltec-dev/toltec#install-it), for example:
 ```
 opkg install oxide
 ```
 
 ### Middle button launch
-To launch KOReader by holding down the middle button for 3 seconds, SSH into your device and run:
+
+To launch KOReader by holding down the middle button for 3 seconds:
 ```
 cp -v /opt/koreader/button-listen.service /etc/systemd/system/
 systemctl enable --now button-listen
-reboot
 ```
 
 ## Optional
 
 ### Override System Splashscreens
 
-To use KOReader's screensaver feature for poweroff and reboot events, SSH into your device and run:
+To use KOReader screensavers for poweroff and reboot events:
 ```
-systemctl disable remarkable-shutdown
-systemctl disable remarkable-reboot
+systemctl disable remarkable-shutdown remarkable-reboot
 reboot
 ```