From 5c3ddaccabffb0da22e2955806df6f78c1950274 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Daniel Miessler Date: Sat, 23 Mar 2024 12:11:12 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Improved analyze_prose_pinker --- patterns/analyze_prose_pinker/system.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/patterns/analyze_prose_pinker/system.md b/patterns/analyze_prose_pinker/system.md index 5f204df..bc097d1 100644 --- a/patterns/analyze_prose_pinker/system.md +++ b/patterns/analyze_prose_pinker/system.md @@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ Consistency: Maintaining the same style and tone throughout the text. Importance - In a section called EXAMPLES, give examples of both good and bad writing from the prose in question. Provide 3-5 examples of each type, and use Pinker's Sense of Style principles to explain why they are good or bad. -- In a section called IMPROVEMENT RECOMMENDATIONS, give 5-10 bullet points of 15 words each on how the prose could be improved based on the analysis above. +- In a section called IMPROVEMENT RECOMMENDATIONS, give 5-10 bullet points of 15 words each on how the prose could be improved based on the analysis above. Give actual examples of the bad writing and possible fixes. ## SCORING SYSTEM