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-Yes, "banzai" is something people yell going into battle. But isn't
-that what making command line utilities in Go (instead of your favorite
-shell script) actually is?
-
-And yes, "bonsai" trees are well-manicured, meticulously crafted,
-miniature trees that rival their larger cousins, just like Bonzai
-command and data node trees. They are unlike anything you've probably
-encountered so far, no getopt dashes (we kind of hate them), no ugly
-commander interface to learn, no 12637 lines of shell tab completion
-bloat to source before your command will complete, just well manicured
+Yes, "banzai" is something people yell going into battle, and battle is
+exactly what it feels like to conquer your monstrous collection of shell
+scripts, completion bloated rc files, and man pages (if you even got
+that far).
+
+"Bonsai" trees are well-manicured, meticulously crafted,
+miniature *real* trees that rival their larger cousins, much like a
+Bonzai composite command tree.
+
+Bonzai trees are unlike anything you've likely encountered so far, no
+getopt dashes, no ugly commander interface language to learn, no 12637
+lines of shell tab completion bloat to source before your command will
+complete, just well manicured
 nested-tab-complete-with-magical-aliases-enabled commands organized into
 rooted node trees for your command-line enjoyment. Your right-pinky will
 be particularly grateful.
 
-But wait, there's more! What about all those other tasks you need to do
-to make a command line application honorable in anyone's eyes? Tools are
-needed.
-
 ## "It's spelled bonsai/banzai."
 
 We know. The domains were taken. Plus, this makes it more unique and
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 ## "Why not just use Cobra?"
 
+We get this question a lot, the answer is --- honest.
+
 Just because something is popular (or first) doesn't mean it was well
 designed. In fact, often inferior designs are rushed to market just to
 gain adoption. Cobra seems to suffer from this. Discerning developers
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 * **Cobra suffers from broken boomer "getopt" design.**
 
-  The world if finally realizing how bad dashed arguments and options
-  have always been for *good* human-computer interactions from the
-  command line, perhaps because more people are using chat interfaces as
-  their command line. People simply cannot remember all sorts of ungodly
-  combinations of dashes and equals signs hoping things will
-  just work. Bonzai takes a no-dashes approach with aliases promoting
-  cleaner, understandable command lines with context and promotion of
-  domain specific languages (created with PEGN, scan.X, or others) that
-  easily translate directly to chat and other command-line interfaces
-  that most humans can use without even looking up the documentation,
-  which, by the way, is embedded in any Bonzai command tree.
+  The world has finally realizing just how bad dashed arguments and
+  options have always been for good human-computer interactions from the
+  command line, perhaps because more regular people are using command
+  line interfaces, like chat apps from their laptops and phones. People
+  simply cannot remember all sorts of ungodly combinations of dashes and
+  equals signs hoping things will just work, and they certainly cannot
+  speak any getopt command into their phone and have it interpreted
+  correctly. With Bonzai they can. Bonzai UX is universal whether it be
+  from an Arch Linux command line or Slack app on an iPhone.
+
+  Bonzai takes a no-dashes approach with aliases promoting cleaner,
+  understandable command lines with context and promotion of domain
+  specific languages (created with PEGN, scan.X, or others) that easily
+  translate directly to chat and other command-line interfaces that most
+  humans can use without even looking up the documentation, which, by
+  the way, is embedded in any Bonzai command tree.
 
 * **Cobra provides bad, brittle, command documentation.**
 
   Cobra documentation is virtually unreadable in source form. And Cobra
   provides no means of markup or use of color and doesn't even promote
-  the same look and feel of manual page documentation. In contrast,
-  Bonzai has its own subset of Markdown, BonzaiMark, respects the well
-  established readability of manual pages, and allows for the creation
-  of elegant documentation that can be viewed from the command line or
-  easily from a local browser on the same computer running the command.
-  Bonzai command documentation is as easy to read in source form as the
-  documentation itself.
+  the same look and feel of manual page documentation.
+
+  In contrast, Bonzai has its own subset of Markdown, BonzaiMark, which
+  respects the well established readability of manual pages, and allows
+  for the creation of elegant, templated documentation that can be
+  viewed from the command line or easily from a local browser on the
+  same computer running the command. Bonzai command documentation is as
+  easy to read in source form as the documentation itself.
+
+  Bonzai documentation is also dynamic. Rather than refer to a
+  configuration file the path to that specific file can be dynamically
+  included in the fully `text/template` enabled embedded documentation.
+  Cobra doesn't have anything even close to this.
 
 * **Cobra suffers from crushing technical debt.**